tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post2914829484985075406..comments2024-03-29T06:30:53.834-07:00Comments on Where the Wild Things Were: First of the Month Fiction - SeptemberLydia C. Leehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-14591937835197333972013-09-01T20:35:40.601-07:002013-09-01T20:35:40.601-07:00I am also the queen of waffle!
Keep an eye out nex...I am also the queen of waffle!<br />Keep an eye out next week for the start of the holiday posts :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-64373094831584476612013-09-01T00:57:50.140-07:002013-09-01T00:57:50.140-07:00Wow!! Love it!!Wow!! Love it!!Lydia C. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-25554985204850058682013-09-01T00:09:12.580-07:002013-09-01T00:09:12.580-07:00She watched him move through the crowd. Watched h...She watched him move through the crowd. Watched him flinch at the touch. She saw the stories told on his face.<br /><br />He saw her watching. The recognition of pain shared passed between them. The world was oblivious to their moment.<br /><br />He hid his face, unable to bear the pain. The stories untold hanging in the air.<br /><br />She turned and let him brush past, pretending they were strangers in the night. Denying their connection, for fear of rejection.<br /><br />Lost connections cut deep.Tegan Churchillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13437605496110028625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-49598905169478404452013-08-30T17:37:51.015-07:002013-08-30T17:37:51.015-07:00So yOu Don't tarnish your own blog with such f...So yOu Don't tarnish your own blog with such frippery...:)Lydia C. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-2356706541947813472013-08-30T17:23:14.862-07:002013-08-30T17:23:14.862-07:00Yes, short story in comments here and then link yo...Yes, short story in comments here and then link your site so people an see what else yOu do. SLydia C. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-3919832814870623112013-08-30T17:13:42.454-07:002013-08-30T17:13:42.454-07:00This looks interesting. I'll give it a go. S...This looks interesting. I'll give it a go. So do we post the story in the comments here and then just link up our whole blog site? Tegan Churchillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13437605496110028625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-84636569651512815012013-08-29T23:19:13.790-07:002013-08-29T23:19:13.790-07:00That said, I still like this one better than the o...That said, I still like this one better than the one with the kid and the teacher. Which I really didn't like.Lydia C. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-53742327051718625432013-08-29T23:06:05.357-07:002013-08-29T23:06:05.357-07:00yes, need stronger defining. Or clearer outline. W...yes, need stronger defining. Or clearer outline. Will maybe reassess this idea and see what I come up with.Lydia C. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-22672094238802585282013-08-29T23:02:30.179-07:002013-08-29T23:02:30.179-07:00There was a competition for the Ubud writers festi...There was a competition for the Ubud writers festival and I sent it to some of the bloggers that do FOMF, so I figured, as they didn't make the final 10, they may want a forum to show what they wrote. You're welcome to just post a story you've written, of any length next month.<br />And lucky you going to Ubud (but the writers festival is October)Lydia C. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-5845189217377605712013-08-29T23:00:30.081-07:002013-08-29T23:00:30.081-07:00:) (incase that reads funny) Where are your holida...:) (incase that reads funny) Where are your holiday pics???? Some of us a HANGING on them!Lydia C. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-8842734484477576872013-08-29T23:00:12.578-07:002013-08-29T23:00:12.578-07:00I did have to read twice but I see you were talkin...I did have to read twice but I see you were talking about being 'the other' woman, not you but the character! xAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-50449572188868037302013-08-29T22:59:49.699-07:002013-08-29T22:59:49.699-07:00You're being nice - I need to work on stronger...You're being nice - I need to work on stronger voice and less ambiguity in the culling of words...interesting process tho, as it still seems clear in my head, but I know the original idea...(I'm the queen of waffle!)Lydia C. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-32892624023252576192013-08-29T21:40:58.534-07:002013-08-29T21:40:58.534-07:00I loved the finality of "That was the day he ...I loved the finality of "That was the day he broke my heart"<br /><br />You've inspired me to try it this month!<br />I'll be in Ubud in November...What's this Writers' Festival?<br />Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03191888392393911765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-62368290496356187842013-08-29T19:18:49.177-07:002013-08-29T19:18:49.177-07:00You have a gift :)
I have the ability to waffle.
...You have a gift :)<br />I have the ability to waffle. <br />I don't know how you get me in with so little said...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-36118006030190277232013-08-29T15:01:38.046-07:002013-08-29T15:01:38.046-07:00ahhh, I need to work on subjects/objects - 2 diffe...ahhh, I need to work on subjects/objects - 2 different women, "I" and "She"...good feedback tho. That's the second time I've done that.Lydia C. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-11008384906220308562013-08-29T14:52:21.237-07:002013-08-29T14:52:21.237-07:00He forgot her birthday so rushed her a gift at the...He forgot her birthday so rushed her a gift at the next opportunity. That gesture broke her heart. What has this man done in their past?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com