tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post8626136958013311373..comments2024-03-28T03:11:21.031-07:00Comments on Where the Wild Things Were: First of the Month Fiction - AprilLydia C. Leehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-66425742615279494852014-03-31T04:04:13.171-07:002014-03-31T04:04:13.171-07:00So beautifully written Lydia xxSo beautifully written Lydia xxLife Love and Hiccupshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03283618400442819761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-69144708593893658832014-03-30T01:31:01.023-07:002014-03-30T01:31:01.023-07:00I do like these fast fictions and I always mean to...I do like these fast fictions and I always mean to link-up but I always forget...<br />Very nicely written. Night can be a very thought-provoking place.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-23577327048896404202014-03-27T21:48:27.070-07:002014-03-27T21:48:27.070-07:00You're wonderfully eloquent in your phrasing :...You're wonderfully eloquent in your phrasing :) <br />Keep it up!<br /><br /><a href="www.jayybear.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow"> Jayybear </a><br /><br />xx.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15818794613902918455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-52766926579349904612014-03-27T18:34:42.275-07:002014-03-27T18:34:42.275-07:00ooooo! Creepy....Very John Fowles...(and don't...ooooo! Creepy....Very John Fowles...(and don't forget to add your blog up the top.)<br />Not shit at all - but it is a little like a word sudoko, don't you think?Lydia C. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-53713773795606620452014-03-27T18:16:57.927-07:002014-03-27T18:16:57.927-07:00Loved your story! You write beautifully.
Here'...Loved your story! You write beautifully.<br /><br />Here's mine—a quickie! A bit shit, but hey, it's my first go (much harder than you'd think!)<br /><br />----------<br />The only light came from above her.<br />The cold dampness of the wet bricks of the well broke through her blouse, sending chills over her back.<br />A flurry of activity circled her feet, tiny pinpricks of hunger tapping at her ankles.<br />Her own stomach groaned with her last meal eaten days ago.<br />How long had she been here? A day?<br />A week? <br />She was not alone. The sharp scent of her captor lingered nearby—the silent presence of someone she knew but couldn’t see. Sweat. Damp hair. The eerie disconnected sounds of shivering. She knew this place. She couldn’t leave.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17132438373585706798noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-33707016554414160452014-03-26T03:35:15.224-07:002014-03-26T03:35:15.224-07:00Such a sad, beautifully written story. Such a sad, beautifully written story. Tegan Churchillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13437605496110028625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-47504618039332161252014-03-25T22:18:35.281-07:002014-03-25T22:18:35.281-07:00This makes me sad Lydia, so mission accomplished! ...This makes me sad Lydia, so mission accomplished! You're good at keeping to a limit, I'm hopeless :)Lisa @ Random Acts Of Zenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12184086300616623784noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-67153846673808870022014-03-25T17:32:48.312-07:002014-03-25T17:32:48.312-07:00Lovely! I am terrible with word limits. Unfortunat...Lovely! I am terrible with word limits. Unfortunately I write like I talk... using 10 words when 2 would have done! #teamIBOTKylie Purtellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00185153539010825877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-87374405497745654352014-03-25T04:28:30.200-07:002014-03-25T04:28:30.200-07:00Oooh! Sad, yet not sad. She seems strong too...or ...Oooh! Sad, yet not sad. She seems strong too...or maybe I mean determined. Nice work. I'm amazed how much can be said in 30 words!Lydia C. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-10658639524156637102014-03-25T00:31:20.953-07:002014-03-25T00:31:20.953-07:00It might be only short, but it packs a punch - wel...It might be only short, but it packs a punch - well done!Janet Camillerihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14040750107420193756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-64362367899490734982014-03-24T23:36:15.516-07:002014-03-24T23:36:15.516-07:00Great post Lydia, love your ideas on Night
Here i...Great post Lydia, love your ideas on Night<br /><br />Here is my 30 word attempt for this month: <br /><br />His hand lingers. Her eyes catches his stare. The empty feeling of knowing between them. Her wedding ring, a cold harsh reminder. This was the beginning of an end.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08678887867911889293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-6038189645183679372014-03-24T22:27:03.787-07:002014-03-24T22:27:03.787-07:00Well written. Raw and full of emotion. I remember ...Well written. Raw and full of emotion. I remember a night or two such as that a long time back in my past. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-32133355601007675092014-03-24T22:21:45.624-07:002014-03-24T22:21:45.624-07:00UnrequiredUnrequiredLydia C. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-89131506590102074632014-03-24T22:16:14.679-07:002014-03-24T22:16:14.679-07:00Nicely done - on the theme of Night too (bonus poi...Nicely done - on the theme of Night too (bonus points for unrequited cleverness).Lydia C. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-83526378248880642802014-03-24T21:35:18.453-07:002014-03-24T21:35:18.453-07:00Wow... a character you instantly understand & ...Wow... a character you instantly understand & can relate to!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18347006827182088859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-26627208439559950582014-03-24T21:07:05.083-07:002014-03-24T21:07:05.083-07:00Also, you write so brilliantly Lydia. These snippe...Also, you write so brilliantly Lydia. These snippets always leaving me wanting more xxxEssentiallyJesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02372695554793237026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-60269171996752191712014-03-24T21:05:20.406-07:002014-03-24T21:05:20.406-07:00Night fell swiftly; she barely noticed.
She was st...Night fell swiftly; she barely noticed.<br />She was still battling the wilful child who cared not that the sun had gone to bed, and he was to follow. <br />EssentiallyJesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02372695554793237026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-48710630159511396522014-03-24T18:05:37.642-07:002014-03-24T18:05:37.642-07:00Great writing, and feelings I can relate to...Great writing, and feelings I can relate to...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-39106444890985727792014-03-24T16:05:27.704-07:002014-03-24T16:05:27.704-07:00Great writing, as usual, Lydia. I could really fee...Great writing, as usual, Lydia. I could really feel her pain, loneliness and despair xKirstyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14645347058596682545noreply@blogger.com