Mine is from the Ubud Writers festival, with the theme of travel.
Change
A large drop of water dripped onto
his shoulder from the green banana leaf above. The early morning rain had been
heavy but the ever increasing heat had already evaporated the puddles on the
path. The sweet smoke filled the air as the neighbourhood burnt their rubbish.
He had lived in this area all his life but it was no longer recognisable from
the unkempt jungle of his youth.
Nowadays his favourite activity
was to watch the new families move into the villas. If there were little ones,
he knew there would be food left out overnight, that he could come back and
steal later. They would squeal with delight and run in and out of the rooms,
opening and closing every door in the compound. Some stayed a long time, but
most only stayed a week.
The houses and farms were almost
all gone, and hotels, villas and shops filled the streets. Restaurants, too.
Rats had no problem eking out their survival, but all other wildlife
struggled, or had gone. His own family had left a long time ago, preferring to
move up the mountains, and away from the crowds of tourists. He was too old to change.
Over time the noises had evolved,
the chattering of birds was now drowned out by the drunken people, spilling
into the streets. The crashing of the waves were no longer heard over the bass
beats of the music in bars. The puttering of motorbikes was now a sophisticated
drone. Only the laughter of children remained the same – the children were a
different skin colour, but children none the less.
The flabby, pink people of the
villas were strange. Some would arrive and never leave the grounds, preferring
to eat in private, and have troops of ladies turn up throughout the day to
paint their toes or rub their backs. Women would cook for them, clean for them
then leave, barely saying a word.
Others would disappear for long
hours in the day and night, returning with bags, and more bags. Eventually to
leave with an extra suitcase, crammed with who knows what.
Some would arrive lily white and
leave a dark brown. Others, a deep red. Hair would lighten, brown marks would
appear on their faces. Change would occur, no matter how brief their stay.
One thing that still remained
were the old buildings of the neighbourhood. Temples that had little offerings
left early in the morning were hiding in between the shops and busy bars.
People would pose for photos but rarely go inside. The last bastion of the old
days. The trees were mostly gone, but the old ruins were intact. They were the
perfect place to escape the heat of the day, before returning to the villas to
find food. Occasionally there was something to eat in the offerings, but
usually some clumsy tourist had trodden on it before it could be pilfered.
The new family in the villa were
talking loudly. The little ones were shrieking and splashing in the pool. It
looked like they were settling in for a while. Groceries were being unloaded
into the kitchen. Bowls of fruit were taken to the coffee table. The clink of
glass as bottles were put into the fridge.
The long-tailed macaque’s eyes
wrinkled into a smile. He licked his lips and pulled them back to reveal his
teeth. He grabbed a leaf from the tree to chew, passing the time while he
watched the kids play. The strange habits of humans never ceased to entertain
him.
After a while, having noted where
the fruit was placed, he stretched his arthritic legs and climbed a little
higher in the tree. He had several hours before it was safe to return, and it
was now time to find some shade to sleep in. The old temple towards the beach
would be empty, unless the dogs had got there first. The fight for shade could
get fierce, and he was too slow to contend anymore. There was another villa a
little further up that might be empty. He would try there first. Slowly he
swung onto the roof and clambered away, into the mid-morning haze, planning to
return when the moon rose high.
So link away, no need for comments unless you've a story to add. Back to business as usual next week, and enjoy the last week of the holidays.
Linking up with Essentially Jess for IBOT.
That was a lovely read. I haven't come across your blog before but I'll go check out the guidelines for submission and be back!
ReplyDeleteNormally you just add your story of exactly 100 words or less than 30 into the comments and link your blog so we can see what else you do without limit, but this time, if you'd rather add a full story, post it on your own blog then link up.
ReplyDeleteLydia, your use of adjectives is a wondrous thing, beautiful writing!
ReplyDeleteZapped. Like something was missing. No energy. No life. Aimless and downcast. The switch had been flicked and she didn't know why. 'Clean' she thought. Clear the energy and mop the floors. She cleaned and still zapped. Then she spotted them. Wilting and starting to rot. A trophy to everything she wasn't. In the pouring rain she took them outside - and threw them into the bin. She dashed back in and washed the vase. She opened the kitchen window to clear the air. Shift and change. It worked. With the flowers gone she had flicked the switch back.
ReplyDeleteI love this - I'll never look at a vase the same way again (I'm very guilty of that rotting flowers scenario!)
DeleteI'm going to think on it. Loved your macaque's perspective on the change in Bali and funny human behaviours. And I'm so jealous of you enjoying a writer's retreat in Ubud - I have coveted that idea for a while.
ReplyDeleteNot going- didn't win! Thus the story appearing here...
DeleteOh it was like I was back in Ubud again! I could see, and feel and taste everything! Beautifully written Lydia xx
ReplyDeleteI was just going to say, that was so Bali! Beautifully written. Seriously.
ReplyDeleteYou really have a way with words. I love reading the stories that you post.
ReplyDeleteYou are such an amazing lady who can say so much with so little !!!! I love reading your writing !!
ReplyDeleteHave the best day even if I haven't joined in for First of the month Fiction !!!
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Wow, I really wish I could write fiction like you Lydia - so well written!
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