tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post3649817290051512586..comments2024-03-28T02:13:29.944-07:00Comments on Where the Wild Things Were: First of the Month Fiction - MayLydia C. Leehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-41872091301830690032013-05-01T23:13:48.632-07:002013-05-01T23:13:48.632-07:00WOW - what a great linky - I won't be joining ...WOW - what a great linky - I won't be joining because I am not that great at writing but I loved the other links !<br />HAve the best day !<br />MeMehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14520543769631877571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-22087991072578332712013-04-30T13:03:21.446-07:002013-04-30T13:03:21.446-07:00Holy crap!
Now you see, I just want the rest of i...Holy crap! <br />Now you see, I just want the rest of it now ...<br />Leanne @ Deep Fried Fruit Leanne @ Deep Fried Fruithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00886017636780724635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-89553895187974116122013-04-30T05:05:31.966-07:002013-04-30T05:05:31.966-07:00LoVe it! I was actually thinking next month I'...LoVe it! I was actually thinking next month I'd have to try one that doesn't have an evil undercurrent (or everyone will think I need therapy), and was wondering how I'd do it - then lo & behold, yours cracked me up! That's great!!Lydia C. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-75991479095529031062013-04-30T04:55:22.811-07:002013-04-30T04:55:22.811-07:00Great story Lydia - very well written!Great story Lydia - very well written!Kirstyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14645347058596682545noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-39659790984778196282013-04-30T03:31:20.043-07:002013-04-30T03:31:20.043-07:00Ok - here's mine!
There’s an acrid, sour sm...Ok - here's mine! <br /><br />There’s an acrid, sour smell emanating from him, while his very pores seem to pulse in rhythm to the tempo of his snores. In, out. The nostril hairs blow gently in his breeze.<br /><br />Eyes narrowed, she watches. <br /><br />Reaching, she squeezes, those two perfect points. <br /><br />It stops. <br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04303404494591946214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-67517554477100772013-04-30T02:48:00.364-07:002013-04-30T02:48:00.364-07:00I love the challenge. It's amazing how difficu...I love the challenge. It's amazing how difficult it is to write a strong piece in so few words. You have done well :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-91486349966137794952013-04-30T02:42:46.676-07:002013-04-30T02:42:46.676-07:00That's very evocative (I had a Sylvia plath th...That's very evocative (I had a Sylvia plath thing going in my head while I read it). It's impressive that so little (words) is needed to provoke an emotion in the reader...Lydia C. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-83263522759411271092013-04-30T01:51:40.731-07:002013-04-30T01:51:40.731-07:00Here is my little First of the Month Fiction:
Bar...Here is my little First of the Month Fiction:<br /><br />Barely breathing. The juggle impossible. Tears inevitable. Life was everything but this. She took hold of her lists. Stacked them neatly. Walked into the kitchen. Lit her stove top and dipped the edge of her stack neatly into the dancing flames. Alight. The burning papers suffocating in flames were the start of her end. She held them, the heat melting at her painted nails. The pain becoming unbearable. She drops the burning stack onto her kitchen bench. Alight. Everything catches alight. She grabs her car keys. Nothing else. And walks out. This was her end.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08678887867911889293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-58782414414313506052013-04-30T00:43:33.871-07:002013-04-30T00:43:33.871-07:00Well I just hope you give that trollop what she de...Well I just hope you give that trollop what she deserves ;-)<br /><br />Visiting from #TeamIBOT xxxJanet Camillerihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14040750107420193756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-74676726195805946582013-04-30T00:16:04.353-07:002013-04-30T00:16:04.353-07:00Oh dear I suspect the next chapter ain't prett...Oh dear I suspect the next chapter ain't pretty.Bachelormumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03504457751565428290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-85584511567121356382013-04-29T23:47:04.740-07:002013-04-29T23:47:04.740-07:00Wow! That's great! Seriously gave me that anti...Wow! That's great! Seriously gave me that anticipation feeling - it's amazing you can tell a whole story in so few words!! And sorry again for not doing the link back to your page - I always do. I'm just a dunce with the linky thing...Lydia C. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-9111179192145124172013-04-29T23:43:59.405-07:002013-04-29T23:43:59.405-07:00Please do! I'll eagerly await it...Please do! I'll eagerly await it...Lydia C. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-33506393838070637722013-04-29T23:43:04.529-07:002013-04-29T23:43:04.529-07:00This is awesome Lydia. I'm no fiction writer,...This is awesome Lydia. I'm no fiction writer, but I love to read. You've been very clever to fit an entire story in 100 words!Cooker and A Lookerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06968377765693895300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-22773107109664069332013-04-29T23:26:34.732-07:002013-04-29T23:26:34.732-07:00Oh I like this! 100 words is never enough!Oh I like this! 100 words is never enough!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-73615953044813660112013-04-29T22:08:38.119-07:002013-04-29T22:08:38.119-07:00Oh crap!!! I want to know what happened.
I'm g...Oh crap!!! I want to know what happened.<br />I'm going for less than thirty words.<br /><br />I stepped off the plane, taking a deep breath. Would he be here?<br />Was this a waste of time?<br />Slowly, I scanned the crowd.EssentiallyJesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02372695554793237026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-69848538982367568792013-04-29T20:59:23.522-07:002013-04-29T20:59:23.522-07:00Woah!!! Keep going, keep going!!!Woah!!! Keep going, keep going!!!Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03191888392393911765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-47923768384826726652013-04-29T20:04:56.435-07:002013-04-29T20:04:56.435-07:00Ooooh creepy! Love it!Ooooh creepy! Love it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09651116248452404269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-26774384004278154542013-04-29T18:35:16.155-07:002013-04-29T18:35:16.155-07:00yay!! I was wondering when this was going to be ba...yay!! I was wondering when this was going to be back - I'll be back with my own 100 words soon xxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08678887867911889293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-4392562658016749132013-04-29T15:34:47.061-07:002013-04-29T15:34:47.061-07:00Yikes! I'm glad you didn't describe the ne...Yikes! I'm glad you didn't describe the next bit. The magic of a short story ;)Crash Test Mummyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00545166654426987352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-12779571379748479522013-04-29T15:21:00.665-07:002013-04-29T15:21:00.665-07:00Oooh, creepy! I loved it :)
Becc @ Take Charge Now...Oooh, creepy! I loved it :)<br />Becc @ Take Charge NowAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-119733539095505639.post-69940274138133439462013-04-29T13:41:42.383-07:002013-04-29T13:41:42.383-07:00Yips! Forgot to say linking up with Essentially Je...Yips! Forgot to say linking up with Essentially Jess for IBOT! Where is my brain. Click here to see who else swung by...http://essentiallyjess.com/2013/04/blogging-ibot-style.htmlLydia C. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911667428856165902noreply@blogger.com